Hi

It's a funny feeling ,

Just doesn't settle right,

Took a few wrong turns with you by my side,

Now your fading ,

Leaving me behind,

I yelled for you to come back,

But you were already long gone,

It's a funny feeling,

Makes no sense,

You said you loved me and wouldn't leave my side ,

Well guess you lied,

Got caught up in the world of nothing,

And me wondering if there was an escape,

Then he came sweeping me off my feet 

Seeing wonder and hope in his eyes,

Put a fire in my heart leaving doubtful feelings behind ,

A new story with such a wonderful beginning, 

Just think how this happy escape started with ,"Hi".

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