Hermoso El Mar

Arms and legs like jello

reaching the top of paradise,

step on step of mellow sounds

for birds singing precise,

at the top of breeze

everything seems to be at ease,

seeing the hermoso el mar

looking to the right,

gray dark smog

that looks like fog,

this is what pollution 

and beautiful is like.

 

 

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