Hello America

Hello America,

With great and wonderous skies

I see thee as a new home,

Filled with promise in disguise.

 

The dream they said was one,

Beautiful and sweet

Yet the hidden devious power,

Would be controlled by the elite.

 

But despite flaws and disillusions

That the nation might entail,

I can still with security know

My love for it shall never fail.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed! Hope you keep writing your mind and heart! Please keep sharing! 

Also there is an urgent matter to end modern day slavery today is national anti traficking day. Let us end world slavery, go sign the petition to make congress act. Look up International Justice Mission. 

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