The Heavy Race

Sat, 04/06/2013 - 18:12 -- Ruby2Me

Location

93454
United States
34° 56' 2.1336" N, 120° 12' 18.396" W

The sound of bitterness falling down the wet road,
The cracks and rips make it hard to walk;
never to run,
We speed up but splashes fall on us, like a heavy burden.
No one can help; no one can see
the simple truth behind the scene,
The sweet and sour drops falling down the face
make it hard for people's race.
Some overlap, some stay behind
which are we, but the ones to blame,
for such a slowly pace.
What has happened?
That caused a downfall?
Rummers never end...
Rummers never die.
So it seems the truth hasn't revealed.
It will someday.
It will some how.

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Ruby2Me

I wrote this poem while going through rough times with my family. It felt like no one wanted to help us and as if we were screaming in silence. No one helped us out. Those were some really hard times.

Ruby2Me

I hope that this poem could help those who are going through hard times.

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