Heart Break Summer

This is my HeartBreak summer...
 
They say love feels good right?
 
 Stay up all night
 
 head in space,
 
 heart in the heights? 
 
A feeling to rival all feelings, 
 
the eye sees the blight as perfection in sight?
 
Nah...Hell nah...
 
This is my Heartbreak Summer...
 
Love Feels like...
 
I got mowed down by a 100 mile hummer,
 
Love sounds like...
 
a crazy drum set, but no drummer, 
 
Love looks like...
 
a  toilet clogged, but no plummer,
if I'm still not clear, 
 
this summer...
 
 was more messed up than a derby car bumper...
 
Why?
 
My heart was taken
 
 by a girl who was taken
 
 I get so displacent
 
Going over and over it
 
Through my mind 
 
Like I was tracin
 
pull up next to you 
 
you dip so quick
 
Zoomin
 
Like we was racin
 
My emotions hatin but I smile
 
Cause I got to show face
 
When
 
 my hunger stay impatient
 
You was my choiced meal
 
Your lips I was savorin 
 
My mind contemplatin
 
How I got so weak
 
Love slapped the chocolate off my face
 
 And Rather than wage war, 
 
I turned the other cheek
 
So my fists are shakin
 
The beat of my pulse pacin
 
 there's no grace
 
When the loser fakin
 
Like he didn't try at all, 
though his walls have been shaken...
 
The future I seek
 
Took off last week
 
So my grey reality
 
Is all cracked and bleak...
 
But I'll move on
 
Eventually...
 
But...this pain new
 
What it does to me 
 
to see you 
 
Up in arms with another dude...
 
Is it wrong to be rude?
 
Wrong to wish he got hit by a train cause he tripped from an untied shoe?
 
Nah... that's mad rude...
 
stare of red hate I give him
 
But I don't know him
 
 I just know you...
 
Now I'm the fool,
 
True...
 
ignored your smiles from a distance,
 
your time was already mine
 
 I never missed it...
 
Swung at the air
 
 my bat hissed
 
Then your love hit
 
His catcher's mit
 
You rashed 
 
my heart got dissed
 
Now my feelings...distant
 
You laughed
 
 my soul splittin
 
You was the moon of my universe
 
when I shot 
 
I missed And
 
The star I struck was a black hole
 
Now I'm getting sucked down 
 
Quicksand...
 
Is it safe to say
 
My dream today
 
Was thrown away
 
Them leftovers in the kitchen?
 
 stupid me
 
 you blossomed...
 
And  I never thought to witness
 
Your eyes saw through the lies
 
So I guess I'll stay...
 
Unforgiven
 
This poem is about: 
Me
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