He drowned

Sun, 10/27/2013 - 15:07 -- svc1494

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In this vast ocean of despair, sadness shall prevail.

Sinking and sinking deeply in this endless pool of rotten loneliness.

But let it be known: he drowned, yet he fought.

He struggle with idle arms and sluggish feet.

Let it be known; tell future generations: " A man once drown in that pool there you don't see.

He feel the agonizing depth of horror; and even so, he fought. 

Thats what shall prevail more than agony and hopelessness--- that he fought.  

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