Hated Life line

Location

55128
United States
44° 59' 22.0848" N, 92° 58' 13.6272" W

What am I supposed to do without you?
Where will I live?
What will I eat?
Please don't leave me again.
I need you to live.
You make me feel safe.
He doesn't need you!
He knows thousands just like you!
He won't appreciate you as much as me!
But right now you are my life line.
You help my children eat, my mother breathe, and me;
you help me live.
Please, Money.
Please don't go.

Comments

cheli belli

that wasn't going where I expected it to, but it was good

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