Harold Crick

Mon, 04/15/2013 - 11:56 -- baumang

Counts brush strokes,
Counts his steps to the bus stop,
Does math in his head,
Relies on his watch,

Counts his steps to the bus stop,
Hears voices narrating what he’s doing,
Relies on his watch,
Looks for the narrator,

Hears voices narrating what he’s doing,
Harold is a tax collector,
Looks for the narrator,
Eats cookies at a bakery of a client,

Harold is a tax collector,
Counts his brush strokes,
Eats cookies at a bakery of a client,
Does math in his head…

Comments

baumang

another pantoum for class.

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