The Happenings In My Head

Mon, 04/18/2016 - 17:32 -- Corex1

Bang! The gun blew, I stand there beseeched as my love falls to the ground, lifeless and empty.

I run farther than I've ever gone going through the endless hall as if there was end that can be achieved.

Even the great God Hermes could not reach the end of this vast hall.

As I run, the ground becomes sand, sand i can't get through, the sand of time that was caught up to me.

 When the sand engulfs me and my soul in the bowels of the great recesses of my troubled mind I start to suffocate

Suffocate on the grievances of my past as I travel into the future.

Soon to wake up to the reality that it was all a dream. 

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