Eyes burn into me,

I feel them on me,

I don't know where from,

Goosebumps cover my body, 

I feel a presence...

Next to me...

Behind me...

All around me...

I feel hot breath on the back of my neck,

I spin around...

No one is there...

"Where are yu?" I whisper

Nothing but silence answers me.

I feel breath on my ear

He whisperes "I love you bia..."

I fall on my knees crying

"Why'd you leave me ?"


So cold...

So alone... 

So helpless...

I feel his presence again

"Don't be sad I'm still here."He whispers

I feel him touch my heart.

"I love you!" I cry 

I feel his presence leave as I said 

"I always will.."


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