The Giver

Sun, 01/26/2014 - 23:09 -- jaycamp

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Giving Up So Easily

Seems like the best thing

Youve tried to make it work

but everythings tells you no!

Giving up or Giving in

which one has more of a consequence

Will I be able to find the push that I need

That is so very deep inside of me

No, I wont Give up

I wont Give in

I can only receive the best from me

to Give my all for me

but to give is not for you but it is to

give apart of my individuality.

 

 

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