the garden of sin

Mon, 07/19/2021 - 07:49 -- Adnan

why is it do we sin ?

we walk a line that is already so thin

the light down the garden is oh so dim

 

he has been branded a sinner

and so the line got thinner

 

we claim righteousness

but what if it is the reason for this mess

maybe its all just a test

 

our good deeds

are like seeds

 

we used to ponder at a song

and now we wonder how it all went so wrong

 

we humans are like satrs

as a group we are a constellation

alone we are in isolation

 

welcome to the garden of sin

remember dont ponder into sin

for if you fall

there is no standing tall

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