Friendship

Friendship is a plant, if you fertilize and water it will grow bigger. 
As strong as the hard oak finish. 
So beautiful and lovely as the tulip. 
The years pass and the plant will grow, and the sun's rays illuminate us. 
As the sweet, delicious chocolate. 
As the warm and special family. 
As the fun and unexpected holiday. 
Do not waste it, do not underestimate, lasts forever never forget.

Comments

weirdpoet37

i think the poem is about friendship.i like the comparisons and the analogy.this reminds me of a quote on ig. have  an awesome day 

anaach

This poem is about friendship. It explains what friendship is. I like how she compared friendship to other things and how she detailed the poem. This reminds me of my friend and I being friends and the memories we've had. (text to self) She used similes, which made the poem almost perfect and detailed. for example, "as the warm and special family". This made me imagine and reflect about it. 

Chacin06

I think these poem is about how she think friendship is and that is really special feeling havind a friendship with someone. How she expressed her feelings with what she thinks friednship is for her is beautiful. These poem remind me about what i think of my relationship with my bestfriend sometimes she annoys me alot but, i love her even though sometimes i dont show it. She uses similies and metaphor.

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