FRIENDS TOOK MY BREATH

            Friends who lean me

          Broken trust forsake

        To call them as i look

           Approach the green scenary

         Am i reach a mountain 

no flower to be

Why so unfair as i u care

Eyes i saw full of anger

Sun rude to be

hmmmmm

 

 

 

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