"free write" he says, hah!

Thu, 10/17/2013 - 21:52 -- ljb553

I write what I see,  I write what I feel,   I write what I do, I write that am so very BLUE. I try to put sounds, out of my mouth. Onto the paper, they never come out. I try to draw pictures, with flowing text and words. It doesn't seem to fit, the colors rather bord. I write what I do, in simple plain lists. But I usualy end up, with tightly closed fists. When I try and write, what it is that I feel, I realize that nothing nothing, can really close the deal. So instead I write, the names of colors. In place of those words and text. I change the view, the questions and answers, leave it open for interpretation and ask "whats next?" I'm not saying, that this is hard for me, to do these things. That I'm anything more than an average human being. I'm just saying, that when I write, my actions prove louder than my words, and at least for me, thats all right.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed! Truly powerful! Keep sharing keep sharing! The world needs your expression! Keep sharing your life your mind your heart! 

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