A flea's advice

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30331
United States
33° 41' 54.834" N, 84° 32' 35.4732" W

I woke up one morning and saw a flea.
He sat on my shoulder and yes he said to me,
"College is just a month away
You're a broke student and really need to pay
Now you are eligible for these loans
but i don't recommend them because you soon will end up home
And your job doesn't pay enough
You are too materialistic and its sure to be real tough
I bet you that there's a scholarship
That will bring down the tuition and help you get a grip
On the financial situation that your in
Because you really need it to be successful and then
You can live up to all your dreams
Can you please understand what I mean
I just really dont want you coming back
Because that dog in you bed is who I plan to attack
So... as I leave you here
Think about your future because college is becoming near
Meanwhile, I will be heading home
I don't recommend a flee bath for your dog...leave that stuff alone!

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