fishing and hunting

all day while i look at my book
all i can think of is when i get to reel in the fishing hook
i yell at my dad to look
and i got a large mouth bass for me and my family to cook

Today is the first day i get to go hunting
in my opninon it's way better than bunting
I shot at the largest buck
but, when it heard my shot it decided to duck
although he was kidding my dad said that had to suck

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