Festering Hatred


Hatred swelled from within there hearts
The night falls as if slain by the sun, soulless are we.
the salvation for which you sacrifice yourself
flares once, then dies,
smothered by a velvet ebon nothingness.
all hope must end.

your passion throbs no more.
how could you not understand?
our dark thoughts surround us, crying,
we are fallen.

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