F*ck society!

Fri, 11/22/2019 - 04:37 -- Liek

People use other all the time.

You're a puppet who gets played with a wire by them.

Put the newest clothing trend on so you won't be recognized.

Buying that new game computer, because you'll be the only one without one.

You're trapped and you look right in the eyes of the cause..

SOCIETY

Afraid in a crowded room.

Drinking that beer, because everyone pushes you to.

Close your eyes...

Feel that heartbeat in the chest.

Don't do it make cut after cut.

It won't let you live your life like you wanted it to be.

Be different.

Be yourself.

You're who you truly want to be.

Own your body

Nothing will get you in their power.

Kill what makes you weak!

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

S.zaynab.k

Yayy yeah so true and you said it in an awesome thoughtprovoking way not to give in to peer pressure and to be yourself and it's ok to be the odd one out. Kudos for a very great poem indeed.

 

 

So nice to read from you again, plz do review// comment my newest poem too.

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