Father to A Son

Fri, 04/26/2013 - 10:09 -- mkruize

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45° 23' 30.2172" N, 94° 40' 56.5968" W

“Dad, can I borrow the car tonight?”
“No.”
“But didn’t you get rewarded for being a good kid?”
“Yes.”
“That went with car privileges too, right?”
“Yes.”
“So can’t I borrow the car for being good?”
“No.”
“But you said-”
“I want a great son, not a good one.”

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