Falling Sensation

Fri, 05/31/2013 - 01:49 -- gigi323

Location

90043
United States
33° 59' 25.3788" N, 118° 19' 43.1796" W

Legs filled with tiny critters,
Spurred to action by some life or death mission
Arms limp yet alive,
Flailing about, swatting an invisible swarm of flies
Teeth scorching cold,
I never knew my tongue could sweat
Face busy as a butterfly,
My cheeks try to high-five each other
Stomach rich with acids,
Some of my organs experiment with zero gravity
Impact unpleasant,
I finally felt what it was like to be 2-D
Conclusion logical,
I love a good cannon-ball

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