Fall Times
Leaf
Colorful, Crumbly
Whislting, Blowing, Falling
On the ground
And plant
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Lex Duvall
I love how playful this poem is and fall is a personal favortie subject of mine so it's absolutely lovely, the only thing I could say is that the last line "and plant" is a bit seperate from the rest of the poem, how you meant it to connect is not quite clear.
Lexi S.
This poem is really fun to read and sticks to the theme the title gave. Everything you wrote gives me the idea of fall, and it set the scene perfectly. The only line that I think kind of sticks out is, "And plant." It doesn't really fit with the flow of the poem and sounds odd when read out loud. Overall, I loved it. Good job.