eyes

how they shine and burn to the deepst parts of my soul like fire your touch calms me down when im red hot and i love the way your eyes shine so bright even in the dark they are like little torches they like the stars that twinkle and burn in the night sky they are my shelter when i am sad they lift me up and i am glad to see your eyes shine so bright 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

Comments

Fitzy Marlote

It's beautiful but, needs to broken into separate sentences.

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