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Thunder storms and lightning strikes

Cloudy days and stormy nights

Bolts of light turning sand into glass As she sat and thought about the past "It’s all his fault, he shouldn't have left!" Her heart was the victim in this theft Knowing he would soon love another She couldn't take this strain much further The guilt of the night was his to take And her core was beginning to eradicate To see all the wrong in his misdoing There was no sign of her improving Weeping day and night since his abandonment She acts in ways of belligerence Emotions of anger builds within There’s a creature inside her beneath the skin Alone she sits full of pain Because he is the reason of her detain Off he fled, so fast and so swift

There she will remain alone and adrift

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed! Truly powerful! Keep sharing keep sharing! The world needs your expression! Keep sharing your life your mind your heart! 

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