Eve bites into the apple.

Thu, 06/13/2013 - 03:51 -- naybo

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United States
33° 59' 58.578" N, 117° 25' 55.722" W

Eve bites into the apple.
How ignorant she is to the consequences of her sins,
but i suppose we should not blame her,
for very well we know the persuasive powers of such a fruit.
It draws you in with its looks,
the wonder of how it might feel to bear its beauty in your hands.
Such damned perfection!
you cannot resist the sweet temptation;
it begs you to press its delicate skin upon your lips.
You know deceit lies in its core,
but your masochistic heart gives in;
it cannot help but want to experience
the bitter pleasures of love.

Comments

figureskater96

I really really love this ! Great work

naybo

Thank you! your praise is greatly appreciated. Feel free to read any of my other works and to refer me to yours if you'd like any feedback X)

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