Eternal Bliss

The echo of an empty hall

White shadows on the placid wall

A waft of he, departs from breeze

And corner eye I chance to see

Complacent lips, that part for me.

 

Then mind by strings turns body 'round

His blushing cheeks, my heart had found

And without thought our bodies pressed

In embrace our souls took rest

His gentle whole my hands caress.

 

For seconds time we just exist

And bask within eternal bliss.

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