Emptiness

Thu, 12/12/2013 - 22:06 -- Mafer98

I woke up today

Feelings were obscured

My tears have not found a way

Out, now I feel void of emotion

I feel empty and blank

Feelings gone, as if

On acid, my heart just sank

I can't believe that this

The weakness I most despised

Isthe one I need most, it is

I can try to cry, but it feels

As though I'm wringing a dry towel

This is worse than my original pains and it kills

Remembering brings forth nothing

I hope this ends soon for I'd rather feel

Pain than feel not a thing

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