Just as the earth weilds power over the moon in its orbit so effortlessly, so does the soul over the human body. Effortlessly glides into the first breath of a new born, and flies away into the abyss when one blows out their last.


Annette M Velasquez

A thought- provoking message. Clear and honest. Your metaphors are strong and you've effectively expressed a lot in so short a poem.


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