The Eager Blade

Jagged teeth

Sharp superior head

The contact with soft supple skin


Adrenaline rises with the intial incision

and the syrupy crimson fluid drips off the wrist

A sigh of pleasure leaves the oral cavity


An error occurs

the flow of the internal lava erupts

The eager utensil lies beside the cold oozing corpse

























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