a dying star

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crumbling inward,

like the guilt eroding my body,

it dies.

darkening, 

becoming weaker,

my body thins out.

all hope is gone.

this is the end.

light,

dulling slowly.

withering away.

but, 

with one last explosion

before we are gone

we are dying stars.

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