Drowning Devotion

Your love
hurts my heart
it drags it down
deep into the water
I think it'll drown
Your love
is so heavy
unbearable
I cannot carry it
Please let me go
Let your love sink
to the bottom of the ocean
I cannot give you back
the same devotion

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