drowing in my sorrow

Mon, 06/09/2014 - 15:13 -- mesha

Drip drip drip
goes the water
Which swallow me whole
Falling deeper and deeper
Can't swim up
Drowing in the deep
Depths of my pain
Drip drip drip
Screaming but no one hears
As the pain swallow me
Can't reach the surface
I'm fading in the
Dark of my pain
Blood in my mouth
Salty salty salty
I'm suffocating
Swim swim swim
No such luck

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