Drinking Humanity

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89701
United States
39° 7' 47.0208" N, 119° 40' 23.1384" W

 When the sky opens up
free souls float away
challenged by the acid that falls down
The ones that make it through
are now free; at peace
The others
the weak ones
arr pushed back to the ground
They will never find peace
if they cannot let go
ITs hopeless
Their fears control them

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