Dreamer

I am a dreamer,


forever shall I sleep,


as long as I lay here


my heart will always beat.


And although my eyes don't open


and my breathing stays the same,


even when it is not spoken


still, I hear your name.


I wish that I could open


my eyes, but they wont budge.


I want to say I love you


so at least you'd know that much.


But forever shall I lay,


not dying, but asleep,


as I dream of you


and as you dream of me.

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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