I am a dreamer,

forever shall I sleep,

as long as I lay here

my heart will always beat.

And although my eyes don't open

and my breathing stays the same,

even when it is not spoken

still, I hear your name.

I wish that I could open

my eyes, but they wont budge.

I want to say I love you

so at least you'd know that much.

But forever shall I lay,

not dying, but asleep,

as I dream of you

and as you dream of me.


Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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