A Dream Fulfilled

Location

08108
United States
39° 54' 48.7692" N, 75° 3' 50.526" W

What happens to a dream fulfilled?
Does it soar into the sky?
And hang there like a cloud?
Or does it flitter into a heart -
Where it stays alive and never parts?
Perhaps it emerges in someone's smile -
And flourishes mile to mile.

Or maybe it lingers in the light.

After all, you achieved it -
With all your might.

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

Though it was short and sweet I really would have loved to have read more of this poem. it was beautifully written and lovely, thank you so much for making it. The imagery you suggested was magnificent!

Becca.

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