Don't Tell Me

Don't tell me..

How to feel, what to do , what to be

 

Don't tell me..

How to cry ,when to lie, how to see.

 

Don't tell me..

It's not the world  but it's you, look at the thngs you do.

 

Give me time to find that maybe it's not me , but them and you the whole time.

I am me, but who are you, teaching me how be some old paradigm fool.

If caring about freedom is not on your list , it's at the top of mine so learn and assist.

 

Do tell me..

To keep going, I do deserve better, I love you

 

Do tell me..

You can go anywhere, be anyone,  I love you

 

Dot tell me 

You are free, you are who I inspire to be, I love you

 

Don't tell me what to do if you not saying it's because I love you

 

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! Please never stop expressing from the heart. Continue the journey of poetry. 

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