Does Your Beauty Ever Fade?

Sometimes, I try looking through you to see if I could find a glitch,
Forgetting you are not transparent.
The roses of Eden are not sure to define your beauty,
It sounds like I'm exaggerating.
But, wait a minute, I think I'm literally overreacting.
Your eyes, your smile, your looks, your expressions,
Never seem to change day after day.
How I wish I could be your forever and yours forever.

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halfasecond

Nice

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