Distance

Fair

What is fair?

The fact that you have him there with you

He holds you, and tells you he loves you

The feeling of being safe and loved in his arms, overwhelms

Rarely is a feeling similar 

Distance is such a bitch,

I got rage with that bitch

Jealousy for those who are near in love

showing off that in their ostentatious ways

Making sure you hate distance

I hate distance

Distance keeps me from you

But all i can do is weep

but one day 

I will conquer that bitch

Distance will disappear

Then in a sudden ray of light

We and our love will be near

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