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Holding hands.

 

They're holding hands.

 

Hands.

 

My hands.

 

My hands are empty

 

Hearts.

 

Their hearts.

 

Their Hearts full with each other.

 

Heart.

 

My heart.

 

My heart is empty with sorrow.

 

Brains.

 

Their brains.

 

Their brains know they are enough for each other.

 

Brain.

 

My brain.

 

My brain only knows heartbreak.

 

Whole.

 

They're whole.

 

They're whole together - they fulfill each other.

 

Whole

 

I'm whole.

 

“Im whole” Is something I could only dream of

 

Happy.

 

They're happy.

 

They Are happy together without me

 

Happy.

 

I'm not happy.

 

I'm not happy while she is drifting away from me.

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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