devil in her eyes

Location

33853
United States
27° 54' 27.9288" N, 81° 35' 13.416" W

the light she once had, the love she once shared.
all is gone, only fire burns within
wanting to be free ,wanting to rage
wanting to hurt, kill. only pain can she cause, only pain can she inflict.

Comments

meli4echeverria

im not that good at writing poems lol

Lynnsey0421

So are you from Lake Wales? If you are I am too. Just letting ya know that, plus I liked your poem so keep writing and keep up the good work!

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