Detaching

Wed, 09/24/2014 - 17:45 -- jmarr13

You retracting your will

Me standing more still,

 You moving slowly and quietly

While I wait defiantly

 

Paralyzed in time

Yet I seem to not mind,

The steps you take with your back facing

Remind me of the dreams I was chasing

 

Our first kiss, our first meeting

  My Heart’s never ending beating,

Reminding and repeating

 

Time will have this memory erode

And remove the feelings I currently hold

So I need not worry or mind

Because I’m surrounded by  time

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