Deep Blue Sea

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Down she splashed in the deep blue sea 

No one knew or had a clue 

Nobody saw her so she couldn't breathe 

Down below she slowley fell, in a flash she wasen't there 

slowly sinking to her death, she kept thinking it wasn't over yet 

All around her she kept thrashing; lashing out and calling for someone to come help  

She wanted to stay, but kept fading away 

Her face so blue, Her heart yet true 

She finally gave up on her pleas and closed her eyes to accept her final leave

 

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