Darkened Spirit by: Jaay Dee Kayy (rough draft/unfinished)

I'm an old soul with a young mind, and my black heart's still a gold mine

If you hold mine in your hands, you could see all the holes lined

And my whole life, bullet holes lined up my chest,

Vest, can't forget, if I take one more shot to this gold mine, this little goal of mine is dead....

 

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