Crown of Chaos 8 - Beta

(This poem is part of a heroic crown of sonnets. For more information, see "Crown of Chaos, Crown Jewel")

 

And if you disagree, then damn your eyes.

 I'm sorry, that came out a little rude

For ev'ry slight I do apologize

I'd like my wit to be a bit subdued.

 

I'm not the type that purposely offends

Though I'm not sure I'd say that I'm polite

It's not that I'm averse to making friends

It's just that smalltalk never is alright

 

I feel I should apologize once more

This sonnet's flow is really rather weak

Transitioning is noticeably poor.

I guess I tried to say that I am meek?

 

Whoever wrote this mess is getting fired

I'm really, really, very super tired.

 

 

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