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WE ARE TOLD KEEP OUR MOUTHS SHUT

BUT WHY DO IT WHEN YOU TEACH FROM YOUR BUTT

WE SIT STILL AND TAKE THE BULL

WHILE WE ARE TAUGHT BY A HYPOCRITICAL FOOL

WE ARE TOLD TO BE RESPECTFUL

YET WE ARE SHOVED AWAY LIKE WE ARE COMPLETE SCUM

WE ARE FORCED TO COME TO SCHOOL

BUT ONLY TO BE PUT IN A JAIL THAT TEACHES TO BE DULL

THE MISANTHROPIC BIG BROTHER ELDERS

KILL OUR DREAMS WITH THEIR CERTIFIED IDEALS

THIS TO ONLY LEAVE US TO WONDER

WHY DO WE STILL LISTEN TO THE BREATHLESS DRUMMER

YOU SAY YOU CARE

BUT ALL WE SEE IS A PERSON RUNNING FROM OUR CONFUSED STARE

SCHOOL IS SUPPOSED TO BE A SAFE HAVEN

BE ALL I FEEL IS A PRISON CELL

WE ARE LOST IN OUR OWN DISASTERS

SO WE COME TO SCHOOL TO ONLY FIND IS AN EVIL BASTARD

YOU ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE

BUT IN SOCIETY THAT'S ALL WE'RE GONNA FIND ANYWAY

SO FORGET YOU AND LOATHSOME ETHIC

MY LIFE IS NOW MY POEM TO WRITE AND EDIT

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