Confused

Tue, 09/17/2013 - 13:57 -- Johnff

They say the U.S is at war accompanied by bloodshed with children dead Hollywood gore. Tears carrying the thoughts of follow brothers what more. And who cares the reason why we kicked down the doors. As long as the wealthy can have riches raping the people like a mindless whore. I to believed at one time my actions are all write but, I lay down my gun I’ll take a book and carry on a real fight.

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Johnff

Lay down my gun

Johnff

Lay dowm my gun

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