Comb Unworthy

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77478
United States
29° 37' 6.6756" N, 95° 36' 32.4036" W
77478
United States
29° 37' 6.6756" N, 95° 36' 32.4036" W

BIG just BIG

Coiled, curled and tangled causes a fit

YUP!

It’s BIG just BIG

It’s half Momma, half Daddy

Half creams, half wrapping

JUST WON’T DO

 

Pressing, they’re pressin’, flat irons are depressing

WHAT SHOULD I DO?

 

They touch it

They frizz it

But don’t want to live it

I’ve got the blues

 

It’s good, no it’s BAD

It’s sassy, yes its sad

To see all of it go to my head

 

 

I’ve reduced it, perused it

But it’s claimed it’s been unfed

WHAT DOES IT WANT?

 

Well to be free of course!

Stop the brushing!

Stop the treatments!

Stop the side eye rolls completely

Because it SHINES

 

My hair can’t be kept

It’s versatile, can’t you see…?

It’s comb unworthy

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