Cloud of love

Around the sun, gathered the cloud,
You spark to me the love to my soul, surely i admire you

I saw a flame far away deeply in your eyes, suprisingly it's my heart that spark within you.

My eyes turned blood red, when i remember how i disappoint you, sorry you don't deserve my selfishness.

The reason to my smile, is always you, deep inside my heart is a special place where you lives.

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