Classrooms of Hawaii

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I sit in 

a dusty room.

People sneezing 

here and there

spreading germs

everywhere.

 

Everyday

it's hot.

no fans 

can be bought.

Many people sweat

which stinks up the classroom

and leaving the chairs wet.

 

Smartboard running slow 

and teacher hot too.

This is class in Hawaii 

Everyday from 

eight through two.

 

Gosh, if the rooms

were clean, 

less sick people.

Less sick people

more kids in class. 

More kids in class

better score for tests.

 

Slow computer,

less time to do work.

Maybe faster 

internet

will do the trick.

 

How 'bout we spend money

on fans.

A/C is hard to

maintain.

It's also too much money.

Much more important stuff

to buy

and gain.

 

Then again we

need bigger desks.

We students

are no longer

as small as specks.

Goodness, we 

need to improve

the clasrooms

of Hawaii public schools.

 

 

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