THE CHILD WITH A GUN

THE CHILD WITH A GUN

The child with a gun is bliss
cause ignorance is bliss right?
and suddenly why does everyone care for life
with hearts pounding in fright.
why has the meek made men weak
with the weapon of fear.
at this spot no lessons can be taught
unless you take away his gut
and to take away his toy
you must not vanquish his joy.
so who will fulfill the task,
who will heist the toy with a mask of joy
in a moment that's bask everyone asked
unpleasant to be seen is a pressurized scene.
to the young man it is no sin
cause no law guiding him
stating "keep out of reach of children"
so he might kill his brethren.
the child with a gun is bliss
cause ignorance is bliss
but this moment it will take his peace.
the ignorance will make the lad understand what it's like to be a man right where he stands.

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